doodle~ing and sudying again.. -w- I've seen many people making fancomics of these two so I guess I'll throw my hat into the ring too. ~ the fancomic would be just short stories . But I have a question.. What would you prefer to view? A comic with a Mushy Gushy Love or Comedic plot? I would love to know what you think :]
I don't really like to use stars, so please ignore the rating.
The backround is sweet, but the letters, "LOVE" and "HONEY" could be replaced with more mushy and meaningful words.
I am paying attention to the eyes, and they're too close together, try and make them a bit farther apart.
Amy's right hand looks like there's a lot of ink wasted on it (one line is too even and another is too uneven). While doing small areas, always steady your hand but don't move too small. There are a lot of other areas that look messily inked.
Amy's bangs are also uneven. Also on her bag, on the side looks like a leather fabric. I am unsure that was your intention, but it still looks pretty off and I suggest you change it.
Paying attention to Sonic and Amy's ears, they're more dark yellow and different from their skin colors entirely.
Onto Sonic, don't make his muzzle so slender on the bottom.
Overall this picture is really cute, and I suggest keeping your style. c:
The backround is sweet, but the letters, "LOVE" and "HONEY" could be replaced with more mushy and meaningful words.
I am paying attention to the eyes, and they're too close together, try and make them a bit farther apart.
Amy's right hand looks like there's a lot of ink wasted on it (one line is too even and another is too uneven). While doing small areas, always steady your hand but don't move too small. There are a lot of other areas that look messily inked.
Amy's bangs are also uneven. Also on her bag, on the side looks like a leather fabric. I am unsure that was your intention, but it still looks pretty off and I suggest you change it.
Paying attention to Sonic and Amy's ears, they're more dark yellow and different from their skin colors entirely.
Onto Sonic, don't make his muzzle so slender on the bottom.
Overall this picture is really cute, and I suggest keeping your style. c:
Visión : bueno visión el dibujo tiene buen aspecto muy lindo te quedo pareciera como si lo hubieras echo a mano LOL (5 ptos)
Originalidad : bueh , para serte franca nunca eh visto nada asi en mi vida es ... como decirlo ORIGINAL , por cierto te quedo bello (5 ptos)
Tecnica : en la tecnica me dejaste impactada si lo has echo a computadora wow ... parece como si lo hubieras hecho a mano (5 ptos)
Impacto : yo no se como decirlo ehhh bueno yo jamas jamas jamas en mi vida vi algo asi te felicito (5 ptos)
FELICIDADES / congratulations
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